Posts : 34 Join date : 2010-03-18 Location : Unknown
Subject: Twice........ Tue Apr 13, 2010 7:29 am
Twice I have made her angry Twice she has been disappointed Twice I have made up and gotten on her good side Twice in 36 hours How? Why? What am I doing? How can I do this to myself? How can I do this to her? I hate myself... pass the vodka Leave me alone... Leave me be I do not want to talk to anyone.... Not even myself
Eric Admin
Posts : 71 Join date : 2010-03-16 Age : 32 Location : Livermore
Subject: Re: Twice........ Tue Apr 13, 2010 9:51 am
This poem is a perfect example of the usage of repetition in poetry. It helps deliver the message much better. I like it.
TheRussianFool
Posts : 34 Join date : 2010-03-18 Location : Unknown
Subject: Re: Twice........ Wed Apr 14, 2010 2:27 am
Mon Oct 20, 2014 3:59 am by oaklipalla
Subject: Twice........ 
