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PostSubject: Twice........   Tue Apr 13, 2010 7:29 am

Twice I have made her angry
Twice she has been disappointed
Twice I have made up and gotten on her good side
Twice in 36 hours
How? Why?
What am I doing?
How can I do this to myself?
How can I do this to her?
I hate myself... pass the vodka
Leave me alone...
Leave me be
I do not want to talk to anyone....
Not even myself
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PostSubject: Re: Twice........   Tue Apr 13, 2010 9:51 am

This poem is a perfect example of the usage of repetition in poetry. It helps deliver the message much better. I like it.
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PostSubject: Re: Twice........   Wed Apr 14, 2010 2:27 am

Thanks dude. I was wondering if I over did it.
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