Eric
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 |  Subject: A bird. By Eric Bracht.  Sun Apr 18, 2010 3:03 am | |
| A bird
out of place
beaten with the
bricks we use
to build
people
Blood
broken wings like paper
torn
A brain
slides down
the broken skull.
We cover the blood
The new foundation
of an old building. | |
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ajax245
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Join date : 2010-03-18
Age : 31
Location : Livermore, for now
| | Subject: Re: A bird. By Eric Bracht. Mon Apr 19, 2010 9:02 am | |
| gruesomely awesome! haha now i just sound like a movie critic. but honestly, it's a good poem. | |
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Eric
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Posts : 71
Join date : 2010-03-16
Age : 32
Location : Livermore
| | Subject: Re: A bird. By Eric Bracht. Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:49 am | |
| - ajax245 wrote:
- gruesomely awesome! haha now i just sound like a movie critic. but honestly, it's a good poem.
Thanks man. | |
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