POETRY LIVE!

So this thread is dedicated to poetry in all of its mistakes. Type poetry, and never hit backspace. Write it as you go. Mistakes and all.

I'll start.

From the toungue of one
whois but all of them
and feels the same as
they would

I don't think it ok
at all.
but what I refer to,
I cannot recall

quatrains of shit.
is that what they're called?
well fuck that
this one only has three

I think
I feel
that I
need
to
slow things
down.
This.
What you are reading
is to slow time.
But I have nothing to say.
Only that I wish.
And nothing will
Nothing.


Sorry about the length of that, it kinda snowballed.
Well, your turn.

close to the heart
doubt your actual part
inthisworld
fuckthis world

i live in seperation
and in damnation
does it matter much to you
do youevenhave clue?

are you sure you have a brain?
it seems as if you don't
i'm just asking this once
oh please take my word

you act as if you know who i am



that was fun. haha

I like it. Keep 'em coming. I've always loved on the spot poetry. It seems to turn out really well.

what the duck
what the duck?
why not what the fuck cause
what the duck is to normal it seems to me
you throw duck and it fucks everyone up
and some people choose not to say anything
others dont even notice witch is funny
i think it is funny cause it makes me laugh why i laugh i do not know
i do know know because i have no brain
why i have no brain is cause



well one of 2 things
the lord didnt want to give me one because i would surpass the humans in smartness
or my fathers swimmers didnt include the brain in my DNA


was that or poetry or should this be in stream of conscience?

TheRussianFool wrote:

was that or poetry or should this be in stream of conscience?

That was good. This thread is about mixing elements of both.

ah ok sweetness